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Most countries spend much money on education as they start to realise the importance of education. In your opinion which two subjects are the most important and which one is the least important?

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Investment
 in
education
 is one of the primordial points to developing
society
. In general, the developed countries are the ones that most invest in
education
 as per the ranking of sub-developed and developed countries. As a matter of fact,
investment
 is what makes a
society
 stand out in the world. The most important subjects, in my opinion, are
physics
 and
history
, as those two can produce real deal-breaker knowledge.
First
 of all,
education
 opens minds and doors.
Investment
 in schools generates open-minded people that create an intelligent
society
. In fact,
investment
 in
physics
 as the Asians do is what makes them so geniuses. For ,example Asians are known for being the best physicist, and the reason behind it is all the
investment
 done by the government. ,
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society
 takes it very seriously, studying in-depth
physics
 gives them the ability to create the tools to build artificial intelligence for robots
for instance
.
Furthermore
,
history
 is
also
 a subject very important for
society
. If the country is aware of its own
history
, it will not make the same mistakes again.
For example
 in Germany, the government invest in the
history
 being thought in primary school so the germans are aware of the wrong done by the government during the Hitler era, so it does not give the chance to happen again. Again, it is extremely important to teach
society
 so the bad parts of
history
 do not repeat themselves. Concluding,
education
 is very important for
society
, it is what separates us from other animals.
Investment
 in knowledge, especially in
physics
 and
history
, will bring greater results to
society
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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