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Band 6

The best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is no denying, that effective measures should be taken to reduce the number of accidents on roads.
Consequently
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, an annual driving exam is one of the proposed actions that can ensure safety in the questions of goods logistics. I will support
this
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 view with the arguments in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, I would like to stress the necessary linkage between training and practical skills of participants
of
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in

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 road traffic movement. The more theoretical knowledge is obtained during the courses, the less stressful is
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an understanding
the understanding

The noun phrase understanding seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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understanding
Wrong verb form
understand

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb understanding. Consider changing it.

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of
Change preposition
apply

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a sequence of actions in a dangerous situation. In any case, passing an exam should be based on
repetition
Correct article usage
the repetition

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 of the theory.
Therefore
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, a licence
that is
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 given on principles of regular tests enables to improve
ride
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the ride

The noun phrase ride quality seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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 quality of truckers.
For instance
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, several countries refused from giving perpetual rights to drive a car, including Ukraine.
Thus
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, these innovations formed a significant decrease
of
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in

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a
Correct article usage
the

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 number of crashes by 27 % over the past year.
Secondly
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, there is an obvious benefit for governmental institutions and the state from
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

this
Correct determiner usage
these

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 tests that could be held systematically.
Hence
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, either
employees
Change to a singular noun
employee

The singular quantifier either is followed by the plural noun employees. Consider changing the noun to the singular or using a different quantifier.

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 of a transportation company, or an enterprise will pay for passing an evaluation. The organization of certification activities on a fee basis allows
to create
Change the verb form
creating

The verb create is usually in the gerund form when following the word allows. Consider replacing it with the -ing form.

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an
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of an

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 additional source of filling the budget.
For example
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, the received funds can be directed to strengthen security at hazardous locations. To summarize, I would like to highlight
crucial
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the crucial

The noun phrase crucial importance seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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 importance of regular examinations that would have a positive impact on
observance
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the observance

The noun phrase observance seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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 of traffic rules.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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