Information technology is making it increasingly easy to collect and access computerised data on individuals, which poses a threat to our privacy. In what ways can the information gathered be misused and what can be done to minimise these misuses and protect the privacy of the individual?

Information
on private citizens has been collected and stored in electronic form by governments and
organisations
for many years.
However
, with the advent of the Internet,
information
about our finances, health, relationships and tastes as consumers can now be easily accessed and disseminated without our knowledge or consent.
As a result
of
this
, unscrupulous
individuals
and
organisations
can misuse
this
information
and threaten our privacy. There are a number of ways in which personal
data
can be misused. The most common is probably the trading of consumers' personal details between commercial
organisations
with the aim of targeting potential customers.
This
leads to people being inundated with unsolicited promotional leaflets, catalogues and emails. More seriously, employers can run checks on prospective employees to glean details about their health, political allegiances and whether they have a criminal record.
Similarly
, insurance companies, not wanting to pay out expensive medical claims, may access the health records of
individuals
who apply for life insurance policies before deciding whether or not to insure them. How can
such
abuses be prevented? Regarding the exchange of customer
information
between companies, the only effective solution is to make unsolicited promotional posts and emails illegal.
Consequently
,
organisations
would have no incentive to trade in people's personal details. In order to protect people looking for work, only the
information
provided by applicants themselves on the application form or during the interview should be legitimate grounds for rejection, and test takers who are rejected should have the right to ask for the reasons why.
Finally
, as a general measure to prevent misuse by insurance companies, it is essential that
organisations
which gather
data
should inform
individuals
of the
information
that is
collected.
Individuals
must be able to access the
data
themselves so that they can find out exactly what kind of
information
it is and check for inaccuracies. They must be allowed to choose how and to what extent the
information
is, or will be, used and they must be confident that the
data
will be held securely. In conclusion, It is not likely that the above measures will result in guaranteed individual privacy.
However
, I am convinced that they will go some way to help limit the misuse of personal
information
while at the same time giving
individuals
more control over the
information
that is
held on them.
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