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Nowadays it is possibe to use computers and moblie phones for automatic language translation, and there is no need for human translators and interpreters. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the contemporary ,world no
one
 can go out without his mobile phone or computer. They are totally involved in all aspects of life. Recently people split between some believing that modern devices can replace the human role and others refusing. The
translation
 process is
one
 example of
this
 debate. On the
one
 hand, Intelligent electronics can facilitate the process of
translation
 by different methods,
such
 as there will be no need to detect the spoken language they can auto-detect it. They can translate faster
for instance
 a large article can be translated in just seconds or less. Electric
translation
 offers a variety of expressions for the needed sentence, and you can easily switch between different languages. ,
Moreover
 mobile phones or computers are available all
time
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 with zero added costs for extra time or whatever.
On the other hand
, Some People - I am
one
 of them - insist on the importance of the human role in
translation
, and that there is no device that can replace the interpreters. First of all the human translator availability ensures that there is no misunderstanding between communicators. He
also
 translates the special expression of each nation in a suitable way.
Besides
, when talking he can give each sentence a special tone which goes on with the meaning and satisfies the listener. The informational background that the translator has, will encourage the
translation
 to be done to the fullest way. In conclusion, Using modern devices is beneficial but we shouldn't forget the actuality that we invented them in order to aid us in our daily life, not for our replacement.
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