Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to attend the party. In your letter, explain why you are organising the party describe what you are planning to do say why you want your friend to come to the party

Dear Keven, I hope you are doing well. I'm writing to invite you to a birthday party which we are planning to have in
next
month in the back yard of our house. My mother's 60th birthday lies on the 10th of
next
month and we are thinking to offer her a surprise party to celebrate it. Since all my brothers and myself are currently living away from home, we are planning to appear at the event without telling her. To make her more amaze, we hope to bring the old books she presented us on our childhood birthdays. Since my mother loves you a lot and thinks of you as one of her own sons, I would like it if you can do the same. As we are hoping to do, I want you to bring the books she gifted you as birthday gifts to make her more excited. We believe
this
will make her more joyful and remembered for a long time. Not to forget, I'm fully aware of your hectic work schedule and hope you'll manage
them
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to attend
this
occasion. Looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards. Alex
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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