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Movies are popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

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In today's era, technology has changed our lives in different ways. One of the most important factors that have been changed is
entertainment
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. Films are a popular source of enjoyment and learning all around the globe. There are certain reasons for the popularity of
movies
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 which will be elaborated
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Firstly
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,
Movies
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 tell audiences about the
ulture
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culture
, tradition,
lifestyle
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and lifestyle
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 of
particular
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a particular
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 region on which
story
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the story
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 of the film is based .
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, if the movie is shooted in Hollywood
then
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 it will show the lifestyle of
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American
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american
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the american
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people
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.
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, if film production is done in Pakistan
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 that will display eastern society.
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, documentary
movies
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 let us learn many things regarding law and order conditions, crime rates,
issues
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and issues
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 related to common
people
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.The world is a global village where
people
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 are interested in learning about foreign countries, and
movies
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 are one of the best ways to access all the information needed.
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, watching
movies
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 either in the theatre or in the comfort of
house
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the house
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 is reasonably less costly than another form of
entertainment
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.
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, In my family,we made large gatherings with our relatives to watch
movies
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. It not only made us feel connected but
provide
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exciting
entertainment
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.
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, watching films is good for
health
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our health
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 because that makes our mind relax and helps us to
detached
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 ourselves from
a
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ectic
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hectic
 schedule. In conclusion, leisure time can be spent in
a
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 best possible way by watching
movies
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,and it is not only a source of
entertainment
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, but
also
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 it is a source of learning about new cultures.It enables
people
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 to have an inside look at all those countries and cities where they have never been before.
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