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some people think that is better to educate boys and girls in separate school. other, however , belive that they should be taught in mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #boys #girls #school #belive #schools
It is common to see a debate among the
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society
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 boys and girls should be taught at same school or not. In
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 there are valid reasons to show each argument is correct, I believe
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the advantages
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 of keeping them together
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 the disadvantages and it is
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good for the lives of
kids
 to learn together. Of course, there are advantages
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 educating
kids
 isolated based on
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gender
. Because of
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could help children to keep their minds more
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 on education.
However
,
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' ability to learn and understand the feelings of
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other party
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.
As a result
 of it, by the time they become
adults
, it might lead to a curiosity left behind in the minds of children.
On the other hand
, keeping them
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same
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 has many advantages. More importantly, it helps them to understand each other well and
as a result
, make themselves more mature when they become
adults
.
Moreover
, in the
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class room
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 atmosphere, it helps them to carry out their education much
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efficiently
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effieciently
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 with the help of mixing ideas between
gender
. As an example,
in
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 a certain age, boys or girls might act, think and express their ideas or feelings in a similar manner.
However
, mixing with other
gender
 helps
kids
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other
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 party reacts to the same situation. Ultimately, that experience will help them to carry out their family lives when they become
adults
. In conclusion, it is obvious to see an argument on the way
kids
 should be taught at school considering their
gender
. It is quite
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 to see
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the
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learning
learnig
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 while mixing with other
gender
 has multiple benefits for the lives of children and the experience gained will be much
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useful
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 once they become
adults
.
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