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Although access to medicine is improving, lifestyle related health problems exist in many countries. What are the reasons? What might improve this situation?

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Despite expanding access to healthcare, many nations still have
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issues
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 related to poor lifestyle choices.
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 is a serious problem, It can be solved by enhancing residents' awareness of the value of
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. The main cause of lifestyle-related
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 problems is that
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 have to try to follow the development of society. The more society develops, the more
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 have to improve themselves continuously, so they have to learn more and work more to meet the requirements of society.
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 regularly lack time for other activities
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 of their intense work and study schedules.
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, students often spend most of their time at home sitting in one place doing homework.
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, in order to have more time for studying and working,
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 frequently prefer fast food and carbonated soft drink
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 as hamburgers, pizza, coca-cola,
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 and so on. The practices mentioned above seriously damage the body and cause a variety of
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issues
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.
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, there are solutions to
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 problem. One of the ways to deal with
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issues
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 relating to lifestyle is
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. By burning excess calories and strengthening muscles and borns,
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 contributes to maintaining good
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. The government should encourage their citizens to regularly
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, with media outlets
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 as social media, television, and newspapers.
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 will support keeping the
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 in residents' minds.
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, physical education should be the main subject in schools. In fact, China has done an excellent job of spreading the message that
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 is important in the media and schools;
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, you can easily observe a lot of
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 exercising in parks or on sidewalks. In conclusion,
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issues
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 related to
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 exist in many nations, despite improvements in access to medication.
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, the problem can be resolved by encouraging
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 to
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • processed foods
  • sedentary lifestyles
  • exacerbate
  • dietary habits
  • affordability
  • unhealthy coping mechanisms
  • comprehensive public health campaigns
  • facilitating physical activities
  • subsidies
  • workplace wellness programs
  • psychological aspects
  • mindfulness
  • stress management
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