You have recently read a book about a city you know well and found some incorrect information. Write a letter to the author. In your letter tell him/her of the incorrect information give him/her the correct information explain why they should correct it.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you about a mistake in one of the articles in the India Today magazine of October 2022 edition. I am an avid lover of the India Today magazine and never missed reading any edition, all the articles are fabulous and informative.

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, while I was through the article about Diu city, I noticed erroneous data for which I wanted to grab your attention. Kindly note that in the section regarding “History of Diu” given on page number 36, paragraph 2, it is written that “old Diu is known for its Swedish architecture”, but the correct data should be that “old Diu is known for its Portuguese architecture”.

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many readers might not observe it, since

this

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is very crucial information for Diu’s history and may misguide someone, I request you amend the subject section in the subsequent edition. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Manoj Pandya

Submitted by manojmpandya on Sat Nov 12 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

156 words

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