Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Alongside the development of
technology
, I agree that humans are more social than they were many years ago. In order to socialize, people
use the tool called communication
and with the improved technology
in the area, we are now provided with so much ease to communicate and to gather with people
from various backgrounds and places.
First
and foremost, we nowadays are facilitated with great technology
in connecting with relatives and friends with much fewer obstacles than years ago. Unlike the time when our predecessors could only talk with others at a certain range of distance or had to pay a fortune to keep in contact with friends in another country, the internet lets us do the communication
without such
hurdles. Moreover
, phone calls are getting more advanced and we can add the video feature so we can do face-to-face communication
, though still on the screen. The easy socializing is proven to be true ,especially in the pandemic era, where direct interaction is suggested to be minimized, yet people
do not find it hard to keep in touch with others as they still interact through phone calls or even group calls.
Not only limited to our acquaintances, but the socialization of people
as people
grows even wider to the point where we can meet and build relationships with people
from outside of our circle. The experts are developing ways so that humankind has the space to connect with people
from similar interests like them, be it in education, business, fitness, or many more things. For instance
, a while ago I joined two sports communities through social media and now I have friends to do weekly runs and tennis practice. Even more sophisticated, there is now a mobile application, for
example
a dating app, in which we can filter and adjust the settings so we can find Add the comma(s)
,example
people
within our preferred criteria.
In conclusion, coming with the advanced improved technology
,especially in communication
is the easiness to connecting with people
. Hence
more ways to socialize with those from our inner circle to the ones coming from the outer part of it.Submitted by hpanduhimawan on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite