Some people like to travel outside their country. Others would rather travel to tourist spots in their own country first, before travelling abroad. Which do you prefer to do and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.

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It is known that some people are more familiar with attractions from another state rather than their own homeland, yet there is still a community who will pick their own
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for a holiday. I, personally, prefer the
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option for some reasons
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as the importance of getting to know more about our home and cultures,
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the cheap cost that comes from travelling in our
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is one of those which provides many beautiful spots to go, not to mention various cultures and traditions to explore as a home citizen,
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it attracts many tourists to visit.
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, it is quite important for me as a local to know more about my own land and the treasures within it.
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, in Indonesia, we have 34 provinces and almost each of them brings its own culture including traditional language, meals, and even fashion which are all interesting to learn. Other than that, travelling in our own place would cost us much less than going abroad for a vacation.
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, oftentimes it is more expensive to book an international flight than the domestic one, not to mention the administrative stuff coming with it
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as a passport and visa. The living cost is
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rather costly regarding the currency difference, especially when you come from a developing
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to the developed one. As a comparison, my spending when I went to Singapore nearly doubled the amount of money from my visit to Jogja within an almost similar timeframe and range of activities.
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conclusion,
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some people still pick going overseas over domestic travel in terms of vacations, my preference goes for exploring my home
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in order to learn more about the place itself and
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because it is often less pricy than the other option.
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