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Nowadays, young people are admiring media and sport stars, even though they do not set a good example. do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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These days the admiration of
media
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 and
sports
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stars
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 as
role
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models
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 is gaining popularity among adolescents.
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, some
people
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 adhere to the belief that these
stars
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 cannot set an appropriate example. I opine that
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 attitude can have both positive and negative impacts. On the one hand, what admiring
sports
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 and
media
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 do is encourage young
people
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 to become successful in their
life
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.
This
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 stems from the fact that younger
people
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 are at the beginning of their
life
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 and they can harness different plans for their future.
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, choosing successful
stars
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 as
role
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models
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 could aid them to accomplish success.
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, when athlete young generations follow Olympic champions and observe how these
people
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 are successful and popular in their field, they strive to become like them and can set their goals based on their
role
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models
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. That’s how admiring
stars
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 can assist young
people
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 to achieve accomplishments in their
life
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. Albeit admiring
stars
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 and following their behaviour is advantageous to some extent, it has a negative impact as well. Admiring
sports
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 and
media
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stars
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 can give rise to that negative trait of
stars
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could
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 become highlighted for young
people
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 rather than positive ones.
This
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 is rooted in the fact that younger
people
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 are not mature enough to tell apart and differentiate the positive and negative behaviour of
stars
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 precisely.
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, a negative effect can become bold and seem to adversely affect the younger
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people
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life
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.
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,
media
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stars
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 appear to smoke a cigarette or drink alcohol for snapping photos,
this
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 negative trait can encourage young
people
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 to kick off smoking which can adversely influence them. Setting
stars
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 as
role
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models
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,
consequently
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, can have a negative impact on young
people
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. In conclusion, admiring
media
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 and
sports
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stars
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 can encourage young
people
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 to acquire achievements in their
life
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.
However
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, following these
sports
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 can have negative effects as well among which bolding the negative traits rather than positive traits can be one of them.
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