Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter • describe what you like about the library • say what you don’t like • make suggestions for improvements

Good morning, dear sir/madam. First and foremost, let me, please,

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express to you my sincere greats for your service

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the members. I have

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than 4 years, and I have to say,

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is the best I

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ever

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The environment in the

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is very calm and quiet, you have all the new bestsellers that I only can dream

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.

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, you have the pretty toddlers inside

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the young

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the possibility to continue their learning. But I think, that there should be more distance from the sofas' corner to

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, because sometimes it's a little bit noisy.

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, the evening classes for children and

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in your

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are perfect, with very adequate prices.

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contribution to the development of our neighbourhood is hard to overestimate.

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only one thing I don't like in our

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of computers and Internet access. It may be very helpful for all of us. I think, that as a first step, we can

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a marketplace to raise money for computer

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our mayor will

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interested to contribute some budget

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class. Best regards, Anastassia