Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter • describe what you like about the library • say what you don’t like • make suggestions for improvements

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Good morning, dear sir/madam. First and foremost, let me, please,
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express to you my sincere greats for your service
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the members. I have
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the
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library
membership
more
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than 4 years, and I have to say,
our
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library
is the best I
saw
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ever
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The environment in the
library
is very calm and quiet, you have all the new bestsellers that I only can dream
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.
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, you have the pretty toddlers inside
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, which
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the young
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the possibility to continue their learning. But I think, that there should be more distance from the sofas' corner to
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the playground
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, because sometimes it's a little bit noisy.
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, the evening classes for children and
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adults

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in your
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are perfect, with very adequate prices.
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contribution to the development of our neighbourhood is hard to overestimate.
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,
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only one thing I don't like in our
library
-
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the absence
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of computers and Internet access. It may be very helpful for all of us. I think, that as a first step, we can
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a marketplace to raise money for computer
class
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at
library
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the library

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, and
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our mayor will
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interested to contribute some budget
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this
class. Best regards, Anastassia
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coherence cohesion
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task achievement
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task achievement
The letter covers all the required points, providing a complete response to the task.
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The tone of the letter is suitable for the context, being polite and respectful.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a logical structure with a clear opening and closing.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • suggest
  • recommend
  • propose
  • advise
  • commend
  • commendable
  • improve
  • enhance
  • expand
  • extend
  • benefit
  • accommodate
  • organize
  • community events
  • programs
  • collection
  • e-books
  • digital resources
  • signage
  • workshops
  • classes
  • skills
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