The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs compare the change in the
amount
of electricity
generated by five sorts of fuel sources in Australia
and France
in two different years.
Overall
, it is clear that
coal generated
most of the Add a hyphen
coal-generated
electricity
in Australia
, while
nuclear power
produced most of that in France
. The amount
of electricity
produced by
Change preposition
apply
in
these two countries Change preposition
apply
all
saw a remarkable increase.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
According to
the graphs, the amount
of electricity
produced by coal was the highest in Australia
with a significant increase from 50 to 130 units
, while
the figure for France
remained at 25 units
.
The amount
of electricity
generated by nuclear power
was highest in France
with an approximately nine-fold growth from 1980, while
no nuclear power
was used to produce electricity
in Australia
.
A marked decrease of
the Change preposition
in
amount
of electricity
generated by natural gas can be seen in both countries. The amount
of electricity
produced by oil decreased from 10 units
to 2units
in Correct your spelling
2 units
Australia
, while
the figure France
showed Change preposition
in France
a
opposite trend. Correct article usage
the
This
opposite trend also
can be seen in the figure of
Change preposition
for
hydro
Correct your spelling
hydropower
power
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