some people think that dangerous sports should be banned,but others think the people should have freedom to choose sports activities discuss both views and give your opinion.

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been a point for debate for quite some time.Some believe that everyone should be free to choose whilst others believe,which I would be an advocate of,life-threatening

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activities

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should be banned for good. On the one hand,the defendants of dangerous

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opine that

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thrilling

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are interesting and everyone should be free to choose whatever game they may want to opt

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,they believe that thrilling

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are far more enjoyable than others and people want to watch

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.

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,freestyle fighting

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produce large sums of money for the organizers every year.

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,each individual should be free to choose whatever sport he wants to opt

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If a person is good at freestyle fighting

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why not let him fight in the competition ring?Even if restricted,

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thrill enthusiasts would still find a way to pursue their passion,even illegally sometimes.

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,many illegal underground sporting

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are reported annually.

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,critics are of the view that

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should be banned as these

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put the lives of people at risk and promote

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stunts and violence in the untrained public.

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are dangerous to perform and human life is way more precious than some temporary adrenaline boost.

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,many human lives have been recorded lost in the past two years alone even including those in the audience along with the players.

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and

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urge untrained people to copy them which any be injurious,

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as there are several recorded injuries that teenagers got trying to copy wrestlers.In order to avoid

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and

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should be permanently banned. I would support the idea of restricting dangerous

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and

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as nothing is as important as

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human life.We can surely live without some adrenaline rush but losing a life to something like

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seems like a poor gamble. In a nutshell,dangerous

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would always be a hot topic and differences between the proponents may never settle.My suggestion would be to permanently ban

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for good to prevent possible injuries to our youth.