Do you believe that self-driving cars will become common in the near future? Why or why not? Support your answer with reasons and examples.

In the recent world, we see an increasing number of news and articles related to auto-driving vehicles every
day
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the development of the device and a large number of citizens are looking forward to a
day
that they can travel by car without touching the wheels by themselves. I have no doubt that the
day
would come soon as for one, people's high demand is there, and for two, governments and private companies alike are devoting
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of funds and energies to the realization of
this
dream. The
first
reason I am convinced that
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automobiles will come in the near future is society's paramount
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for the product. To illustrate, the number of senior citizens is surging everywhere in the world and we see a lot of shocking news that elderly drivers met accidents due to their
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of cars. If we could implement self-driving vehicles, those
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disastrous
disasters
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situations could be avoided.
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, when institutions can control
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and manners of drivers, there would be
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traffic conjunctions and troubles on roads. The
second
powerful reason is the vast investments public institutions and private industries are making to achieve
this
cutting-edge device. Undoubtedly, by the realization of
this
scientific achievement, all stakeholders will be significantly benefited.
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, Toyota bought a huge land for test driving and
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to invest
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the introduction of
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highest quality auto-driving car in the market at the fastest
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against its competitors. In conclusion, I strongly
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believe
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believe
that our dream-come-true self-drive cars will be given to us not far from now. The reason I believe it is from society's huge demand for it and
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and organizations' commitment to realize it. I am convinced that the product will become an epoch-making saviour for
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society and am looking forward to a
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can be done using it.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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