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Nowadays people are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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Today we live in a world of comfort , where "use and throw" products are a norm of life.
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 can execute to reverse the situation. One of the biggest reasons for the ever-increasing garbage crisis is the habits of the current society. They do not think twice before throwing out an item , be it a plastic cover or a broken toy.
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 is caused because the spending power of an average person has increased to what it was a decade ago. They do not think twice about wasting food or throwing out
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 of packaging materials used even for very simple items.
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 can bring in stringent policies to counteract
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 and foremost , the community should be made responsible for their behaviour. In Kerala, a small state in India, the
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 has made it mandatory that garbage collection will be done only once a week.They have very specific criteria for what will be collected. Items like plastic bags and glasses will not be collected.
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 creates a burden for the community and they are forced to come up with novel ways to reuse these items.
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 should provide support and subsidy to companies that eng
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