Some people think that animals should be treated as friends. Yet, others only consider animals as sources of food and clothing. What is your opinion?

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Humans
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have
two
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fundamental demands: spiritual and physical
life
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. Both of them play a vital role in a balanced
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. Raising
animals
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is one of the ways of servicing those demands. Should
animals
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be more important in spiritual
life
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as a friend or in physical
life
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as
food
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? It has some arguments in
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aspects. I suppose either of them is reasonable.
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of all, all of us have to eat for a living and not all of us are vegetarians,
meat
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is one of the most important foods for
humans
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. The
food
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supply to
life
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from the
animals
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comes from
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as the marines, the birds or the cattle. And for the sustainable supplement,
humans
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have raised the
animals
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to get their eggs, their fur and most important their
meat
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.
Animals
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have been the sources of
food
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for
people
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in the world from the old days up to now and maybe in the far future until
humans
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could find alternative
food
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sources. Nowadays, the livestock industry is more intensively growing than ever.
For example
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, Vietnam exported 40000 tons of poultry
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mainly chicken in 2020,
two
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years following, the number has increased by nearly double.
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, based on the BBC, beef and pork are the
two
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most consumed cattle
meat
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worldwide.
On the other hand
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, in terms of mental
life
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,
humans
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need
friends
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for sharing emotions or spiritual support. Some
people
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chose
animals
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to be their
friends
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, especially in modern
life
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when the young generation wants to narrow their social networking and just stay alone. In
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case,
animals
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,
in particular
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, dogs or cats, even birds or others, are chosen to be their
friends
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for sharing the stories
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and emotions in daily
life
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. In some hospitals, the therapeutic treatment for patients had mental problems is using
animals
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to cheer them up and help them to express their painful feeling. In these cases, the
animals
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are used like
friends
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who are not judging, not critical of your mistakes, or your past, just listening to your words.
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, it is not dubious that some
people
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consider
animals
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as a friend or a member of their family. Opinion, I respect both ideas. It is based on the demand of each
people
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, some want to eat
meat
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so raising
animals
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for a
food
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supplement while some want to have
friends
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for taking care of them or sharing their daily
life
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, they can raise
animals
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as a member of their family.
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, I suggest just eating several kinds of familiar
animals
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such
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as pigs, cows, sheep or some poultry like chicken, and duck; some
animals
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like dogs, cats are more popular and considered like human pets so eating them will cause an argument in terms of
animals
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’ rights. In conclusion, eating
animals
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is considered in the culture of the country or nation you are being.
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