Large shopping malls are replacing small shops.What’s your opinion? Good or bad?

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Small shops are getting converted into big
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. I think it has both advantages and disadvantages because both big and small shops serve the audience's necessities and
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I would like to express my notion on
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view.
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, small complexes basically rely on daily profits and many local
people
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try to go to local vendors and purchase daily essentials like milk, curd, groceries etc... . If big complexes are constructed which has daily essentials, it will impact the economy of local vendors and
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disturb the economy. To cite an example, it has been reported in a few magazines that local vendors are facing an economical crisis due to supermarkets like D-mart which is impacting their families and livelihood. Due to the steady increase in
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in the current days, governments should provide a few subsidies for the local dealers so that they will not be burdened.
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, one can not find all the items needed by
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in the local markets.
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, they rely on supermarkets to get the products needed.
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, few supermarkets offer discounts to
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which encourages
people
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to go and purchase essentials in the
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.
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, D-mart is offering a 50 per cent discount on vegetables and dairy products if one shops for a minimum of two thousand rupees.
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, I would like to conclude that even though
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provide you with special offers and has plenty of items, it is often needed to support small businesses by purchasing from them and helping them grow up.

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