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With rise of e-books comes the decline in paper book. Some people sees this as a good step forward while other do not . What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Nowadays, the
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 industry is
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living through
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living through
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 diminishing, in favour of e-
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. Many people believe that
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 is a good trend-forward, whilst others think that
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 contents are better products. In
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 I will examine the advantages and the disadvantages of the growth of
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the e-books
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 provide some examples. On the one hand,
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 step has two main advantages.
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, by developing electronic devices to read, we can dramatically reduce the
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 of
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, by saving many forests and green spaces.
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 production involves the
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 of tons of
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 produced from plants and
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 is a
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 for the environment.
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, many organizations with the goal of preserving trees are promoting the
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 of e-readers to tackle the
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 of deforestation.
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, having the possibility to get hundreds of digital
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 in one only device, will reduce the room necessary to collect several
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 for readers. It is
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 better because we can have our booklist always with us as a useful item,
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 of bringing with us many
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.
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, my mum used to read a lot, and when I and my family went on holiday, she always had the
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 of bringing many
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 in the suitcase. Since we gave to her an e-reader,
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 disappeared.
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, the
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 of electronic devices to read has the main disadvantage.
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 step can decrease the quality of customers' experience. People love turning pages, underlining statements or words and writing notes.
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 may be impossible with e-readers and many passionate readers can lose the privilege of living their
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 by holding them in their hands. Writers should pay attention to
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 request because they can lose their clients. As an example, I'm a
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 lover but I will never buy a digital
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 because I love the physical form of them. To conclude, despite e-readers might decrease the quality of experience for clients, I strongly believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because these new tools will reduce the waste of
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 and will give the possibility to readers to holding many
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 in one item.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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