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In many countries, people don't recycle waste materials. Such as bottles and newspaper. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

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In the current era, plastic bottles and newspaper recycling is a very public concept that many associations launch an
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 campaign to start
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 on it, but
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 is not accessible in some countries. So, in
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 essay, I will discuss why
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 might be the case and how the problems can be solved. The reasons for the lack of recycling are quite easy and simple.
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, due to the lack of how important
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 is and how it will help at least the environment,
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, avoid burning plastics by putting out near the rubbish a selected recycling basket so it will be easy to grab.
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, inconvenient to recycle at
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. So,
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 will make it hard for the manucpility when they want to collect the garbage. These two reasons affect negatively if recycling is not occupied.
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, solutions are easy and many but all depends on people and government
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 to be responsible,
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 to
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 on what campaigns discussed.
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, parents have a big role to reflect
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 to their children by starting it at
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.
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 governments or municipalities can't
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 alone, parents in the
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 town must
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 and help them to solve
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 problem by being more knowledgeable and accepted. To conclude, it is a lack of
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 about the benefits of recycling and reluctance among people. To sort their refuse, that prevents them from engaging with
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 useful practice. When they fully understand the advantages and can recycle their rubbish at
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 and outside easily and quickly.
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