You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

#brochure #tour #mountains #re #part #wouldn #operator #information #dates #prices #concerns #fitness #level #addresses

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to show my interest in going on a tour of the Northern Swat Valley in Pakistan. I saw its advertisement on a brochure I received at my home. I find hiking and walking tours refreshing and delightful.

Moreover

, my brother is visiting me on the exact same dates,

therefore

, he might accompany me during the trip and enjoy the mesmerising scenic beauty of Swat. I would appreciate it if you could provide me with more information about

this

tour. I would like to know the price of the tickets and if there is a discounted price for two people. Can we do an online payment?

Furthermore

, on which dates will it be leaving and at what exact time of the day? There is one more thing I would like you to know about and it is my mild asthma problem.

Although

I often visit hilly areas,

nevertheless

, I do not face any symptoms like breathing difficulty.

Hence

, I wanted to know if I need to acquire a medical certificate from a physician to prove my fitness for

this

trip. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Leo

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

197 words

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