Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, we see most

children

playing some sort of musical

instrument

in schools, universities and kindergartens, but

this

should not be forced on

children

. Some educators,

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state that every kid should be taught how to play an

instrument

,

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I completely disagree with the aforementioned point. The following essay will outline why it is not necessary for every child to learn an

instrument

.

To begin

with, educators should allow

children

to choose their desired musical instruments and if the child doesn’t like the

music

they should not be forced because

this

will lead kids to have high pressure, which can cause frustration and stress among them. As an example, youngsters will interact with musical gadgets since teachers forced them, but what will happen when they reach an age they could understand,

children

will completely ignore the

music

,

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they will stop playing as soon as they can.

Therefore

, educationalists should allow

children

to find their internal motivational skills or talents without providing them with negative reinforcement.

Secondly

, teaching

children

how to play an

instrument

even when they dislike makes their cognitive skills reduce and they will not engage in other learning activities efficiently and effectively. Since

music

is exposing

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children

to multi-sensory experiences in their life, allowing them to slow procedures and steps will enhance their capabilities to engage with some sort of

instrument

.

Thirdly

, according to a research article published by an author 20% of

children

are sensitive to

music

, which means

this

can impact the long-term mood changes of

children

if the educators forcefully teach them. To sum up, even though there are several benefits of

music

for

children

, I completely disagree that kids should actively learn

music

in their life, because forcing them for playing instruments will have serious consequences in the future,

such

as high pressure and low cognitive development.