In some coutries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
Nowadays, adolescents are inspired to job or travel for a year between finishing high school and university studies. In my opinion, the benefits of
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Working or travelling in the middle of finishing high school and starting university studies can give a perfect view of the outside world and help them to understand what they want to become. The advantage of Linking Words
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, there are some minor drawbacks. What most minors do not think about is their addiction to money. When you work as an intern, it is obvious that you will get paid. At a young age, many youngsters get distracted from their path. Linking Words
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, when you travel, you will meet many types of people. At Linking Words
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, some of you can not distinguish what type of people are around you. Some can help you to grow or push you to the wrong path for their own sake. So, teachers and parents should track their children and help them to keep on track.
In conclusion, many countries should start these practices for young people and help them to grow and develop an interest in their desired field. Because they are the future.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite