One of your penfriends wants to improve their English at a language school. They have never studied at a language school before and have asked for your advice on how to choose a good one. write a letter to your penfriend, Advise them about the following; the teaching method,the number of students in class and the number of hours per week. write 150 words in 20 minutes.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Dear Robert, I hope
this
email finds you in radiant health and you are doing well. It has been a
while
since we
last
communicated. But I am glad that you reached me in times of need. I understand that you wish to improve your English Speaking Skills at a language school.
However
, I will provide some ideas which will be helpful for you to make a decision. First and foremost, you need to check about the teaching method before enrolling in the course.
This
is because a few learning institutes do not provide techniques that are easy to understand.
Secondly
, you have to get the information about how many students are allocated in a batch as it is difficult to learn anything within the chaos as sometimes pupils are not able to get full support from the teacher.
Finally
, you must ensure that they provide ample practice sessions at least 4-5 times a week
as well as
checking the number of classes allocated for
this
course. I hope the suggestions mentioned above will be helpful for you and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours lovingly, Cathy
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task achievement
Make sure to address each point in the prompt with equal emphasis to ensure a fully developed answer.
coherence and cohesion
Divide content into clear paragraphs, each addressing a specific point from the prompt for better organization.
coherence and cohesion
Use a varied range of cohesive devices to help improve the flow of your letter.
task achievement
Keep the register consistent and appropriate for the task. A friendly and supportive tone is suitable for a letter to a penfriend. Make sure this is sustained throughout the letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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