An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poor countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?
A growing number of specialists,
such
as doctors and teachers, are migrating from their poor countries
to work in developed countries
. In this
essay, we will discuss a possible problem and what we can do to resolve it.
Several professionals in poor nations suffer from many issues. Thus
, they make the decision to leave their motherland and seek a fulfilling life outside their countries
. This
reflects on their countries
and causes a lot of problems. It is likely that this
migration will reduce the level of services in the country
, such
as healthcare or education. This
would reduce the chances of improving the country
as well as making it less prosperous. For example
, it is known that India has a lot of specialists in various fields. An enormous percentage of them tend to depart India and work in Europe or the U.S.A.
There are many ways to remedy these problems, such
as by enhancing their workplaces, such
as schools or hospitals, or by providing an appropriate environment for them. A second
solution would be to raise their wages to levels similar to those of developed countries
. Due to doctors' travels and overseas work, Kenya suffered. Therefore
, they decided to pay them a higher salary, which decreased their travel time between countries
.
The general conclusion is that professionals tend to emigrate from their poor native land and settle in a developed country
, causing problems for their home country
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
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- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite