some people think that libraries are a waste of ressources and money. so computers should replace them. however,others do not agree. discuss both sides and give your opinion

These days, it is considered by some

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that constructing

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can be a way of wasting

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resources and

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why they need to be changed to computers, while others argue against it. Both views will be discussed in the following essay, and I opine that the latter view is more persuasive. On the one hand, resources and

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can be wasted on building

libraries

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as more and more

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explicit the

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when they look for

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rather than going to

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.

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of all, with the development of

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communication technology, a huge amount of

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is well within reach for almost all

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in the world as long as they have computers or smartphones.

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, the amount of

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in a library is confined to

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physical size of it whereas that

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on the

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is not limited.

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, organizations

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as companies and schools, in which countless

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and documents are made, can easily upload their

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on the

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without any limitation while there are only so many books a library can have.

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,

libraries

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should be established

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a significant amount of resources and

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are required. The articles and other

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in

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are much more credible compared to those on the

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since anyone who wants to

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others can post articles or reviews which can possibly mislead

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.

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, data in

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is what

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can rely on because it is generally thought that books are written by the ones who have studied and researched a lot.

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, when I was in university, I needed some

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on biology, especially on ultrasound. The

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thing I did was to go to the library

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my school, but I gave up finding what I wanted because it took me a lot more than I thought it would.

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why I decided to look for the

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I needed on the

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. It was convenient but I realized I made a terrible mistake when I got

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grade from the professor. The reason was that I referred to

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information

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. Had I

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my paper before

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, I would have been able to get a better grade. In conclusion, I strongly believe that building

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not a waste of

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and

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.

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is because the

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from

libraries

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is much more reliable than from the

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.