Many country encourage tourism. Does it bring advantages or disadvantages?

Several parts across the globe are inviting tourists to their countries. I completely agree with
this
statement since There are several advantages if the audience has an interest in travelling to other areas as a tourist and to name a few of them,
economy
, culture and knowledge transfer would be the best examples. I would like to explain my opinion on the advantages of global travel in
this
essay.
Firstly
, the main benefit of abroad roaming is that
economy
is generated in that country via paying for hotels, purchasing local products etc.. which might provide jobs to several localities and can run a family without any hiccups. To cite an example, three years ago, when we went to Paris during my summer vacation, we stayed in a lodge and we were charged some amount since we resided there.
Besides
this
, we
also
bought electric items and toys since they were a bit cheaper when compared to my home country INDIA. Since we paid for the products we purchased there, it is indirectly an income to the shopkeepers who are working in the shops and
thus
we as a tourist contributed to the
economy
of PARIS. Adding to that, abroad travellers will
also
get to know about the culture and traditions of that place and with the possibility of a worldwide tour, there will be an exchange of information about cultural and traditional incidents among localities and tourists which will strengthen the relationship between the two areas.
For example
, when we went to Nepal
last
year after travel restrictions are left due to reducing in the number of Covid-19 cases, there was a guide who helped us understand their culture and traditions and he
also
made us visit famous temples across Nepal and in ,turn we
also
listen down about few famous Indian temples like the temple of Lord Venkateswara which is located at Tirupathi and
also
about Shiridi Sai Baba temple which is situated in Shiridi.
Finally
, I would like to conclude by saying that governments should stop imposing taxes on travel and reduce commodity taxes for foreigners so that generated
economy
gets increased
further
.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

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  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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