More and more animals are on the verge of extinction and othera are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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the deforestation and hunting of carnivores

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of wild pets are hunting and erosion. Due to

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, many animals lose their natural habitat and put their lives at risk. Many people

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animals for their food.and most

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people killed the beast for

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production of luxury goods like bags, shoes, coats etc.

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to knowing mankind about the importance of conserving

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trees and endangered

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.and many carnivores are starving decease.

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population

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there is a high

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land and wood. The forest lands are cleared to make it suitable for various activities like agriculture, timber extraction, construction etc. Poaching is another activity which puts the

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of many wild pets in danger. A number of

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are killed

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for various purposes. So, the

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- while evolution is always a reason there are manmade

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, namely two, mainly global warming and merciless killing. In conclusion, human activities

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as denuding and hunting are the major

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for the

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wildlife

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government

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strict law that

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or at least

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logging and poaching,

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can be saved from the border or

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