More and more animals are on the verge of extinction and othera are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
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wildlife
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To begin
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of
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extinction
of wild pets are hunting and erosion. Due to this
, many animals lose their natural habitat and put their lives at risk. Many people hunting
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wildlife
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