A huge amount of money goes towards children's education. In some countries, the government pays some or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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, countries

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almost all the

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in their government budget that, clearly, will affect the future of their citizens.

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of all, when a country assumes to pay most of the

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of young

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education

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the benefits will be for all

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society

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. By assuming a high percentage of their budget on

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will improve,

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of that, the system

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education

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will be better. Another important advantage is with more money to spend, the nations can have more schools,

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, the access

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education

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highly

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growth.

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will achieve better skills for the future and to construct a better

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.

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, spending money

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only one issue will leave

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budget for other important matters,

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health or employment.

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society

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, in a long term, the country would have professional highly qualified and competent.

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professional

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that

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good

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have more

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to have betters skills to cope

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future and

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a contribution to the nation. To conclude, spending more money on

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may be the best option for a nation, thinking in a long term.

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, people will have more opportunities and a better construction

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their

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will significantly improve the different

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of a country,

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quality of life,

education

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system and equality.