Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, there are a lot of
students
who work
while studying. Although
this
tendency may lead to negative results, the number of young people who sacrifice study for work
is growing. I believe that this
problem
has certain causes and can be resolved by taking some special measures.
It is apparent that students
who work
while studying have financial expenses to meet. One common cause is education high fees. Colleges and universities set up high tuition fees. Some families cannot fully afford higher education for their children. Students
who study away from their hometowns have to pay for accommodation, food and entertainment. These problems force them to earn money to afford their living. For example
, I know some students
who work
in accommodations to earn money for their schooling. I believe that the issue of students
working during their studies results in lower quality of schooling and no benefits at all. This
problem
can be solved at the government level.
I can suggest two possible solutions to this
problem
. Firstly
, the government could make higher schooling free. For instance
, this
result can be achieved by financing educational establishments from the country's budget. This
makes colleges and universities accessible to everyone and but it will also
reduce the number of working students
. The second
solution is providing unpaid e-learning. Such
a form of distance education doesn't need a lot of resources to be maintained. What's more, students
do not need to leave their home town and can plan their schedule the way they prefer.
In conclusion, I believe that financial resource is the main cause for students
to work
but this
problem
can be solved by lowering the financial expenses students
have to meet.Submitted by vishwa808827 on
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