Today’s teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss the view and give your own opinion.
It is often considered that nowadays the young generation gets easily depressed as compared with past youths. In my, an inclined
this
is true that juveniles live stressful life
because competition around the globe rising. Fix the agreement mistake
lives
Thus
this
essay will elaborate on the statement which leads to the logical conclusion,
Analyzing the statement and explaining further
, the first and foremost reason behind is that the contemporary era is an era of modernisation, hence
, the soaring number of netizens which causes a rise in competition, this
factor causes stressful life
because everyone wants to achieve their aim in life
. Furthermore
, the rise in technology enhance the demands of children they easily get attracted by advertisement and request their guardian to buy them, but wise is
not complete they act like annoying and develop self-depression. Verb problem
they are
for example
, a survey conducted by The Time of India mentioned in their article that earlier young teenagers use
to enjoy their Wrong verb form
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life
with their friends and use
to work hard without any resources, these things made them successful personalities but nowadays the scenario changed.
Probing ahead, stress is a particular state of mind which varies between individuals. Wrong verb form
used
Moreover
, stress is more common in societies where adolescents currently get pressurised
when they commit wrong things. Verb problem
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Although
, in past times young kids were unknown
of the happenings in the world so they enjoy to their fullest without any concern. Correct word choice
unaware
For instance
, in the ,
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use to
relax more they do not worry about their future goals because love to spend time in farms and houses because they do not have any demands.
In a nutshell, Verb problem
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according to
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argument one can reach the conclusion that in today's Remove the comma
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scenario
young generations live stressful Add a comma
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life
because they are surrounded by many amenities which attract them and cause stress in the mind. Certainly, Fix the agreement mistake
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this
state of mind used to be crystal clear and happy.Submitted by vermarohit981.rv on
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