You are going on a business trip for few days and have arranged to leave your children with a friend who will look after them. Write a letter to your friend including -tell your friend what kind of food your children like and dislike. - give details of activity your children enjoy. - Suggest arrangements for collecting your children after your trip
Dear Sam,
Hope you are doing well and are in good spirits. I am writing
this
letter to express my excitement that I am going on my dreamed
business trip and I want you to do me Replace the word
dream
Correct article usage
a favor
favor
by caring Change the spelling
favour
my
both children when I Change preposition
for my
will be
far away from them.
If I talk about their Wrong verb form
am
dietery
preferences, they love to eat pasta and cereals with mild milk. They do not like to eat non-vegetarian food and they will never touch it if you try to serve them. I humbly request you to take care of them by providing their favourite food.
My Correct your spelling
dietary
both
children are highly engaged in doing physical activities Correct pronoun usage
apply
such
as they love to play football, Cycling and hang
out with their friends. So, you can simply accompany them by taking them to the park where they can enjoy these activities with you.
As I am expecting that I will reach home at 6 o'clock Wrong verb form
hanging
in
Change preposition
on
the
Correct article usage
apply
friday
evening. If you do not mind, Can you drop off my children at my place Change the capitalization
Friday
please
? It would be great for me to thank you and will meet you once again.
Hope to hear back from you soon!
Warm Regards,
Zen.Add a comma
, please
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task achievement
Include a closing sentence to emphasize appreciation for your friend's help and express excitement for your trip.
task achievement
Briefly mention a backup plan if any unexpected situation occurs (e.g., if your flight is delayed).
coherence cohesion
Try to avoid redundancy in expressions, such as 'I humbly request you to take care of them by providing their favourite food'.
task achievement
The letter uses a friendly and appreciative tone throughout, which is very suitable for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The letter clearly separates different topics into distinct paragraphs, enhancing readability.
coherence cohesion
The closing is inviting and warm, which leaves a positive impression.