Write a letter to the television channel Manager about boring programs during the day time. Tell him about the programs, give suggestions.
Dear Mr Sharma,
I am one of the viewers of your channel Starplus. I am writing
this
letter to give you some suggestions on the programmes telecasted during the day time. I am watching your channel since my childhood but for the past year, some of the shows have interrupted my interest. A few of them are "Sasural Simar ka", "Paakhi" and "Kyuki Saas Bhi Kabhi bahu thi".
My only concern is that the above-mentioned programmes have become monotonous and it seems like the storyline is being escalated without any logic. Yours is one of the reputed channels and serials like these are ruining the popularity. During the day time, mostly the viewers are housewives who would love to see shows which will relax them.
I would suggest you telecast some programmes related to parenting and comedy shows which will help them to rejuvenate and cherish their leisure time. I hope you will take my suggestions in a positive manner.
Yours faithfully,
SnehaSubmitted by cashreya2675 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite