IN SOME COUNTRIES MORE AND MORE ADULTS ARE CONTINUING TO LIVE WITH PARENTS EVEN AFTER COMPLETING THEIR EDUCATION AND GETTING JOBS. DO THE ADVANTAGES OUTWIEGH DISADVANTAGES.
Relationship
of Correct article usage
The relationship
parents
with their Use synonyms
children
is a Use synonyms
god gifted
entity. Some people believe that the Add a hyphen
god-gifted
trend
of adults living with their Use synonyms
parents
has escalated over Use synonyms
the
time. While after they have fulfilled their studies and started their careers. From my Correct article usage
apply
perspective
Add a comma
,perspective
this
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trend
has plenty of merits but a few side effects as well.
On the one hand, there are a variety of positive sides Use synonyms
of
living in a joint family system. Change preposition
to
Firstly
, at the time when adults finish their studies and secure jobs, Linking Words
parents
Use synonyms
needs
them the most. Change the verb form
need
This
is Linking Words
the
crucial time for the Correct article usage
a
children
to support them both financially and physically. Use synonyms
For example
, they need assistance in house chores Linking Words
such
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,
washing, shopping, cooking and even feeding. Remove the comma
apply
Secondly
, serving Linking Words
parents
later in their Use synonyms
life
gives us a feeling of satisfaction and Use synonyms
proudness
. Which in turn leads to a friendly environment for our kids. Replace the word
pride
Thirdly
, it is a common observation that minors living in Linking Words
an undivided families
Correct the article-noun agreement
an undivided family
undivided families
tends
to be more social and interactive. Which is very pivotal for their upcoming Change the verb form
tend
life
. Use synonyms
In other
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words
Add a comma
,words
children
staying with a variety of family members are loving, caring, bold in communication and have Use synonyms
less
Correct quantifier usage
fewer
behavioral
issues.
Change the spelling
behavioural
On the other hand
, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
trend
Use synonyms
have
a few drawbacks as well. Change the verb form
has
To begin
with, Linking Words
private
Add an article
the private
life
of both Use synonyms
the
individual is compromised which is currently a very debatable issue. Correct article usage
apply
For
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instance
arguing among different family members Add a comma
,instance
sometime
make the environment very uncomfortable and disturbed for the other living members. Replace the word
sometimes
Moreover
, spending Linking Words
life
with elders turns Use synonyms
children
to become dependent and spoon Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
feed
feeding
feeded
. To elaborate Correct your spelling
fed
the
point, Change preposition
on the
majority
of individuals cannot progress in their practical Correct article usage
the majority
life
without Use synonyms
support
of the elder resulting in their lagging in future Add an article
the support
life
.
To sum up, Use synonyms
although
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this
Linking Words
trend
Use synonyms
have
Change the verb form
has
few
negative sides, in my opinion living with Correct article usage
a few
parents
Use synonyms
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
a
way more pros than living separately. It helps in establishing a strong relationship with the elders as well as Correct article usage
apply
children
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, it should be encouraged.Linking Words
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