Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person.Why do you think this is the case?What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person?
In the modern 21st century era that we as the
world
are
currently live in,the age group of youngsters who are more commonly known as ‘’teenagers’’ have been noticed due to the reason of Unnecessary verb
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a
particular manner which they embody in their Correct article usage
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day to day
lives.The teenagers in our social Add a hyphen
day-to-day
world
nowadays have shown us that they are more keen
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the
social Correct article usage
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media
rather than a face
to face
natural communication with each other.This
phenomenon may be caused of
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by
this
behaviour as children.
The generation
z had been brought up by the baby boomers and the Correct article usage
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millenials
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millennials
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they were born into a world
full of technological devices and the Correct your spelling
advantages they
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bring along.There is a high chance that they observed their parents watching TV more than regularly or working on a computer constantly.Correct your spelling
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in a world
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communication would not be an appealing option for them due to the fact that it might feel unnatural and alienating to go with
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Although
our world
is currently going in with this
instinct now,I believe even though not easily,it is still possible to shift that direction.
The human being is a social creature.We learn from each other as heritage.In addition
,there is a theory in pediatric psychology that carries the thought of children doing what they see from others especially from their parents rather than what they are told to do.Even though the
generation z is the age group most affected by the inventions of technology and social Correct article usage
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media
,their elders whom
are their parents,relatives or teachers could encourage them to choose a natural Change the pronoun
who
way
of communication only by being examples of this
argument firsthand.
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the
social Correct article usage
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media
as a way
to keep in touch with the world
.However
how easier it may make life with it’s
many benefits,soon the absurd Replace the word
its
way
of socialising could be meeting up in person if we continue with this
predicament.To ensure that it will not,the older generations should carry the responsibility of teaching their youngs
how the Correct your spelling
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behaviour side by side in their spans of life.Submitted by ecemanginn on
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