Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There is no doubt that
cars
are one the most important transportation means and nowadays, many
use
these vehicles as their most prominent mode of commuting on a daily basis.
However
, there are some experts who predict in the near future they will be replaced by other means. I am among those who believe that
number
of
cars
in
use
will decrease and in the following, I will elaborate on the reasons.
First
, according to many recent studies, the population of
world
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is growing rapidly and their need to have an affordable means of transportation is increasing. According to statistics, in twenty years, our natural resources like oil and
gas
will decrease sharply, and scarcity will increase the price of
such
chemicals dramatically. Donald et al. revealed in a recently published paper that the price of one litre of
gas
in Los Angeles, California will be more than 200 dollars in less than 10 years. It is evident that most people cannot afford
such
high prices and they have to
use
public transportation. With the increasing
number
of people who can buy
cars
, market demand will drop sharply and many car manufacturers will be broken and their production lines will be closed. To make a long story short, It seems sweeping changes related to the fuel
cars
consume are required to predict anything other than decreasing
number
of
cars
in
use
.
Second
, many may argue that technological revolutions may change the game and that green fuels will change the paradigm. There are two main candidates, Li-ion batteries and Solid Oxide Fuel Cells. I can logically prove that these two are not qualified substitutes as having vehicles using
such
sources of energy may require a revolution in many infrastructures
such
as
gas
stations
.
Gas
stations
have to be completely replaced by some new brand energy
stations
that can charge these
cars
. If we take into account, the
number
of
stations
and the whole money-consuming process of making the demanded buildings it seems it does not sound.
Therefore
, there are significant barriers in the way of developing
such
modern
cars
and many countries, including developing countries will not be able to promote using these state-of-the-art automobiles. All in all, the high prices of non-renewable resources will definitely block any
further
use
. Substitute technologies are possible in case of changing many infrastructures that are not viable for many nations,
thus
it will not help promote car applications.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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