Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen – A nice, respectful style

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Dear Mr Ravi My name is Maruthi and I'm your neighbour, have been observing for the

last

couple of days that your pup is continuously barking all the time due to

this

I'm writing a letter to let you know how your neighbours are disturbed because of your pet. I work in a software company and due to the corona pandemic, I will be attending the office from my home

however

when I attend any important call's with the clients I am getting distracted and am not able to concentrate because of the noise made by your puppy. We are living in a good community and there were no issues seen till now

however

for the

first

time I felt its quite disturbing because of your dog. Please check your dog what happened to him and why it is barking continuously. If necessary action is not taken

then

I will be reaching out to the community for

further

help. Looking forward to your prompt reply. Yours faithfully, Maruthi Reddy.

Submitted by maruthireddyjoy on Wed Nov 16 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

169 words

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Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen – A nice, respectful style

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some people feel unsafe either staying at home or going out. What are the possible reasons for this? What can be done to address this issue?

Nowadays, some countries are spending a lot of money to make it easier to use bicycle. Why is this? Is it the best solution to transport problem?

Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think younger leaders would be better. Do you agree or disagree?

Governments give lots of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been spent better elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Dear Madam, I am Sarah. I live in Canada. I want to studying your training course and I do not know any information about the course. I am sure you can help me.