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Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems does it cost ? What are some possible solutions?

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There has been much discussion revolving around whether it has become compulsory for humankind to compete with youngsters for employment. It has caused plenty of issues that require practical solutions to fix them. Convincing arguments can be made that, the younger generation has an innate ability to create and multitask. It is admired in a workplace to have the capability to come up with new ideas.
For example
, youngsters who work as marketing managers or art directors are required to come up with new ideas every day. Because millennials are
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speed with everything that happens around they become more valuable in a workspace. That makes older people to be underestimated. Another reason can be made that the pension age is very low. That makes employees hire younger people
instead
 of older ones who actually can be more valuable and have better
job
 flexibility.
In contrast
, there are a few solutions that can fix the situation.
For example
, delaying pensions for a few years. It could give an opportunity for older people to still have a
job
 and maintain it. Another solution can be that the government should reserve some jobs for non-youngsters which would make more
job
 opportunities for seniors.
In contrast
, there really is an issue of youngsters stealing jobs but reducing the pension age and regime reserving jobs for non-youngsters would not only overcome
this
 problem but
also
 create more
job
 opportunities for seniors.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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