One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -apologise for missing the birthday celebration -explain why you missed it and why you didn't tell your friend -say what you would like to do to show you are sorry

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Dear Alisha, I am writing

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letter to apologise for not coming to your birthday party. Due to some unforeseen circumstances, I was not able to make it and didn't inform you as well. I am really sorry for the same and I hope you will forgive me once I tell you the reason for not attending the same. On your birthday morning, my grandmother got sick. I had to take her to the hospital in a hurry and she was admitted immediately. Doctors told us that she has to be kept under their observation for at least two days as she was having problems with her kidneys. Due to

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, I was very worried and I was not in a position to come to your party as I needed to fetch medicines for her from time to time. I didn't tell you as I didn't want to spoil your mood. I hope you will understand my situation and accept my apology. I have

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bought a present for you and will give you one once we meet. Luckily, my grandmother is doing better now and I hope to meet you soon once she is discharged. Once again, really sorry for not coming. I wish you all happiness and a great year ahead. Yours lovingly, Bhawna

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

216 words

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