Write about the following topic. People should choose their course of study not on the basis of their own interests, but based on the kinds of jobs they can get. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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some people think they have to choose their major of study on the kinds of jobs, other experts and the public believe that it is not true and
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of their own interests. Let me discuss my opinion in the following paragraphs.
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different views and opinions toward each other, there has always been disagreement on
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, some citizens think if choose of major they do not like that, they can not succeed in it.
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course and
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say life is short.
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a job.
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about the mindsets and beliefs of the
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category I have to say that they think it is not true and the experts believe humans need to select
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course and
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way for themselves because
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let down about future.
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everyone is
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, every major university has a lot of jobs in the future. In conclusion, if I want to express my view I should say the best solution for
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and I suggest the government spend more time and money to improve
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culture.
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