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Some believe in enrolling their children into the best schools so that they learn to socialize while others believe that home-schooling is a better option. Discuss both views and where do you stand on this topic?

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A significant number of
people
 consider enrolling their
children
 on the best schools so, as to be taught how to socialize while others are
in contrast
. They believe home-schooling is a much better idea. In
this
 essay, I will describe both points of view and draw a rational conclusion at the end. On one hand, many parents complain about their child becoming a looner
as a result
 of progress in technology and
children
 not playing outside.
For example
 in Iran, teenagers rarely go out and have a real conversation.
Therefore
, when
children
 stay at home and study it is less possible to be able to socialize.
Second
,
children
 who study at home may see fewer
people
 as they only see their parents, relatives, and their teachers,
Thus
, they hardly make friends and cannot communicate that well.
For instance
, those
children
 who do not go to kindergarten have a really hard time making friends when they see other men for the
first
 time.
On the other hand
, professional schools have talented and expert teachers only for making
children
 comfortable and able to talk. so, young generations can stop being looner and even not having mental health issues.
For instance
, in Germany, professional
people
 try hard enough for their students to avoid them getting any problems.
Also
, students who study at school may learn from the mistakes they make from talking to others, an opportunity which does not happen to some home-schooled students,
accordingly
, these mistakes which can ruin one's relationship may never occur. To exemplify, research showed
people
 who communicate very often have few problems in their relationships. In conclusion, a lot of
people
 think enrolling their
children
 on the best schools so, to be taught how to socialize while others think the opposite way. They believe home-schooling is a better idea. I described both views and I consider, taking
children
 to school is a wiser way.
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