Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree.

Nowadays, several kinds of

health

issues are extremely common and a number of communities believe that doing research as well as treatment for these

disease

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needs a huge amount of

money

,

consequently

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they suggest that if

it

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possible to increase the investment in the process of prevention

then

it will save huge cost that

are

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used to spend on

cure

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. I completely agree with that opinion and

this

essay will show the economic point of view of a country and

health

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the health

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aspects of

people

. To commence with, there are many

health

center

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and

also

a

lot

of medical

college

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where government invest a

lot

of

money

for

doing

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the treatment of sick

people

. If government should invest that

money

on

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spreading the reasons and the obstacles

one

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people

faced because of illness that will be much

helpful

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for

people

to understand.

For instance

, if government spreads the information about several kinds of diseases because of having a

lot

of cigarettes or alcohol

then

many

people

will get aware of

this

and

obviously

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some will stop that.

Secondly

, individuals are recently a bit aware of

health

issues in that case if

people

do a

lot

of

exercises

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and

by

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maintain

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a healthy diet it is

also

possible to become less ill.

For example

, an athlete doesn’t get sick

so

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as

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quick

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like as

normal

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human being, because they always do regular exercise and they try to eat healthy food regularly.

Moreover

, they should try to avoid alcohol and that

are

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the main reason behind

to become

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healthy.

Normal

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human

being

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beings

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should try to follow them. To conclude, governments should spread

money

on

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health-related

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health related

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education by providing information to citizens about the disadvantages of diseases and

people

should take care of their

health

to make them fit.