Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree.
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health
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disease
needs a huge amount of Fix the agreement mistake
diseases
money
, Use synonyms
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consequently
they suggest that if Add a comma
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possible to increase the investment in the process of prevention Add a verb
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. I completely agree with that opinion and Add an article
a cure
the cure
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health
aspects of Correct article usage
the health
people
.
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health
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center
and Change to a plural noun
centers
also
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lot
of medical Use synonyms
college
where government invest a Change to a plural noun
colleges
lot
of Use synonyms
money
for Use synonyms
doing
the treatment of sick Unnecessary verb
apply
people
. If government should invest that Use synonyms
money
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on
spreading the reasons and the obstacles Change preposition
in
one
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apply
people
faced because of illness that will be much Use synonyms
helpful
for Correct quantifier usage
more helpful
people
to understand. Use synonyms
For instance
, if government spreads the information about several kinds of diseases because of having a Linking Words
lot
of cigarettes or alcohol Use synonyms
then
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people
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this
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some will stop that.
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health
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people
do a Use synonyms
lot
of Use synonyms
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exercise
by
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apply
maintain
a healthy diet it is Change the verb form
maintaining
also
possible to become less ill. Linking Words
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so
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as
quick
like as Change the word
quickly
normal
human being, because they always do regular exercise and they try to eat healthy food regularly. Add an article
a normal
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, they should try to avoid alcohol and that Linking Words
are
the main reason behind Change the verb form
is
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healthy. Change the verb form
becoming
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human Add an article
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The normal
being
should try to follow them.
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beings
money
on Use synonyms
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Add a hyphen
health-related
health related
education by providing information to citizens about the disadvantages of diseases and Add a hyphen
health-related
people
should take care of their Use synonyms
health
to make them fit.Use synonyms
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