Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree.
Nowadays, several kinds of
health
issues are extremely common and a number of communities believe that doing research as well as treatment for these disease
needs a huge amount of Fix the agreement mistake
diseases
money
, consequently
they suggest that if Add a comma
,consequently
it
possible to increase the investment in the process of prevention Add a verb
isit
wasit
then
it will save huge cost that are
used to spend on Change the verb form
is
cure
. I completely agree with that opinion and Add an article
a cure
the cure
this
essay will show the economic point of view of a country and health
aspects of Correct article usage
the health
people
.
To commence with, there are many health
center
and Change to a plural noun
centers
also
a lot
of medical college
where government invest a Change to a plural noun
colleges
lot
of money
for doing
the treatment of sick Unnecessary verb
apply
people
. If government should invest that money
on
spreading the reasons and the obstacles Change preposition
in
one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
faced because of illness that will be much helpful
for Correct quantifier usage
more helpful
people
to understand. For instance
, if government spreads the information about several kinds of diseases because of having a lot
of cigarettes or alcohol then
many people
will get aware of this
and obviously
some will stop that.
Add a comma
,obviously
Secondly
, individuals are recently a bit aware of health
issues in that case if people
do a lot
of exercises
and Fix the agreement mistake
exercise
by
Change preposition
apply
maintain
a healthy diet it is Change the verb form
maintaining
also
possible to become less ill. For example
, an athlete doesn’t get sick so
Correct word choice
as
quick
like as Change the word
quickly
normal
human being, because they always do regular exercise and they try to eat healthy food regularly. Add an article
a normal
Moreover
, they should try to avoid alcohol and that are
the main reason behind Change the verb form
is
to become
healthy. Change the verb form
becoming
Normal
human Add an article
A normal
The normal
being
should try to follow them.
To conclude, governments should spread Fix the agreement mistake
beings
money
on Add a hyphen
health-related
health related
education by providing information to citizens about the disadvantages of diseases and Add a hyphen
health-related
people
should take care of their health
to make them fit.Submitted by koly2751 on
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