Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Languages
are a way to communicate with others
however
, many vanish off the surface of the earth each year. It is a general view that if there are limited
languages
around the globe
then
there will be a more simple and easy lifestyle for individuals. I accept that there are clear benefits of fewer
languages
but I believe that it has some drawbacks
also
. On the one hand, minimal
languages
have several advantages.
Firstly
, there could the effortless communication between different countries
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, English is an international language, which is a common platform for nations to socialize with each other which has made living uncomplicated.
Secondly
, now there is more uniformity among various states, they co-ordinate with other ethnic groups easily. It has
also
created a good understanding between people
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example, now humans celebrate Holi which is an Indian traditional festival because of reduced barriers
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contact and increased socializing.
On the other hand
, it is ethnocide for a country when its ancient language fades away and the loss of culture is very overwhelming for the old generation.
For instance
, French was an International dialect before English but it was replaced and gave a heart-stricken effect on French people.
Moreover
, if a country does not have any historical language
then
there is no identity of that nation as every great community is represented by the historical facts it has. In short, former linguistics have a grave influence on the current value of natives. In conclusion, despite the disadvantages of the loss of an ancient accent, in my
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there is good ground for accepting its advantages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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