More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the majority of parents are allowing their kids to use computers and iPad because they think that will teach them

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skills. In my ,opinion I completely agree with

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view that the benefits more than the drawbacks and in

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essay I will explain why and draw my own conclusion . In terms of the positive sides of allowing

children

to spend their

time

playing on their smartphones that might make them more intelligent and smart . The reason behind

this

is to allow them to see another world and gain more and more knowledge of technology .

For example

,

children

can learn easily because they have the possibility to gain information rapidly and technology might improve their skills . Another reason

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is these days there are many apps they can download on their computers to learn another language

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as cambly which they can have lessons to learn a new language from native teachers in their home .

On the other hand

, despite the benefits sides , there are a few negative points of allowing

children

to spend too much

time

on their devices .

Firstly

, they might see or read something not appropriate for their age.

Secondly

, spending most of their

time

playing on computers might affect their educational grade .

For instance

, if they are always playing on smartphones they might not have

time

to study and focus on their homework . In conclusion,

although

there are a few disadvantages to allowing

children

to play on tablets, the advantages outweigh when parents have control and put a specific

time

to use it .