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In many countries, people do not recycle waster materials, such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

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It is undeniable that the conspicuous decline in converting waste products
such
 as paper, glass, and plastics in most
countries
 is one of the most challenging issues in the contemporary world.
This
 essay will discuss why
this
 might be the case and how the problem can be alleviated. There are two notable reasons why people in a lot of
countries
 do not involve in recycling. The
first
 reason is the lack of awareness. These
countries
' governments fail to educate the people about the benefits and importance of recycling,
thus
 leading to them trashing waste can be used for other purposes. Another reason is no form of encouragement. Those who anticipate giving their rubbish to recycling are not recognized and rewarded,
consequently
, over time,
such
 individuals are susceptible to discontinuing. To aid recycling in more nations, certain methods should be adopted.
First
 of all, recycling programs should be created and displayed to the masses, by the authorities. These programs can be advertised on major media platforms
such
 as television, radio, and newspapers.
Furthermore
, the government should place recycling bins at accessible locations and enforce a law that rewards individuals who utilize the recycle bin rather than the general bin.
In other words
, a reward
such
 as money should be given based on the quantity of rubbish brought per person. In conclusion, the lack of awareness and encouragement contributes to the absence of recycling in most
countries
. If the above measures are put to play, I believe that people will be more interested in recycling.
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