You will take a short holiday in London next month and would like to spend some time with a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •Tell him when you will be in London and why •Ask him for recommendations of what to do there •Suggest some things you can do together You should write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write any addresses
Dear Jass,
How are you?
I hope you are doing well in London. It's been a
while
since we met each other. Actually, I'm writing this
letter to let you know that next month, I have a plan to pay a visit to your city for a small vacation and would excited to spend some quality time together.
Well, I've got a two-week break from my office and decided to enjoy this
period with you in London. My flight is scheduled to arrive in your town on December 27th at 5am, just before New Year's Eve and your birthday. So, we can celebrate your special day and participate in various world-famous New Year's Events.
Most importantly, I'd be most grateful if you could reserve tables in some famous restaurants as you know that I'd love to try different types of food. Apart from that, can you suggest some places to visit after New Year?
I would appreciate it if you could join me in exploring the views of London and restaurants as well. We can talk about our college time while
going on a long trip in your car during your free time.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Tajinder SinghSubmitted by tajinder.panag on
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Coherence & Cohesion
Develop each paragraph with a clear focus on a single idea to enhance the letter's cohesion.
Task Achievement
Ensure that each idea presented in the letter is fully elaborated to maximise task achievement.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use a range of cohesive devices effectively to create a better flow in your text.
Task Achievement
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout your letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite