Your friend has written a letter to you asking for advice regarding a visit that his/her parents will be making to your area in the near future. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, recommend a place where they can stay suggest the places they can visit oﬀer to do something with them

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Dear Alex, I was thrilled to hear about your parents' plans to visit Kandy

month to celebrate their wedding anniversary. As you asked in your letter, I'd like to recommend "Hotel Regent' for your parents to stay in while they are in the city. The place has all services required at a reasonable price and

also

Its location is close proximity for many attractions nearby. While staying here, I hope they can leisurely visit many attractions around the city. Temple of tooth relic, Botanical garden and Rivier cruise tours are some of the most thrilling locations and hope they'd enjoy them a lot.

Also

, if they have spare time, they can pay a visit to the caves in Dambulla. Please let me know whether they have plans to stay a weekend, so I'd be more than happy to join them to drive them to Nuwara Eliya as well. Hope it would add memories for the anniversary and will be an unforgettable time here. Regards Peter

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

166 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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