Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. Others say films should have educational value. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays while some
people
consider
films
as a pure source of
entertainment
without any
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, some think that they should contain educational factors. In my opinion, it would be very useful for the viewers if
movies
are created for both
entertainment
and educational purpose. On the one hand, some
people
think that
films
are just for
entertainment
due to the fact that
films
are a part of the
entertainment
industry, and
this
industry is made to make entertaining programs for their watchers. After a hectic working day at school or company,
people
often feel stressed;
therefore
, many
people
tend to watch
movies
,
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programs that help them relax and entertain to recharge themselves so they may not have the energy to learn more from the program.
Furthermore
,
films
are usually made with epic scenes, special lightning
effect
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effects
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and famous actors and actresses so that they could help their viewers entertain the best.
That is
why entertaining
movies
are often watched the most.
On the other hand
, the benefits of the educational lessons from
films
cannot be denied.
Firstly
,
movies
leave a long-lasting memory in the audience so they have a strong influence
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the way
of
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people
think and do their work.
For instance
, via cartoons and
films
children can learn about
the
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wrong and right,
adults
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and adults
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can acknowledge many useful life skills.
Movies
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characters can touch their
viewers
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viewer's
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heart
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, which is sure to change
people
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people's
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minds and their way of living.
Secondly
,
people
can study more about history, cultures, languages and lives around them. Watching
movies
is an effective way for
people
, especially children to learn languages and history, which many of them do not have
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in learning
those
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at school. To conclude,
although
the main purpose of
films
and TV programs is to help
people
entertain,
movies
should
also
contain educational values.
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