More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem? Problem and solution

A large number of wild species are on the brink of extinction and many others are on the endangered list. There are several reasons for the

wildlife

crisis.

However

, there are

also

certain steps we can take to resolve

this

problem. One of the major problems affecting the existence of wild animals is the destruction of their natural habitats. Habitat influences biodiversity deeply. Those natural places are destroyed because of deforestation, environmental pollution, too much urbanization and so on, which not only affect animals' homes but

also

their food cycle, atmosphere and reproduction process. Manitoba,

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province of Canada, where many natural resources that are significant for

wildlife

have been ruined since the

1820’s

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. Thousands of acres of grassland are gone, almost 75% of ancient forest in

this

region has been cut down,

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% of

wetland

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the wetland

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is destroyed.

Thus

, the necessary growth of

wildlife

and their life cycle is disrupted causing

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endangerment. Some protective measures,

however

, should be taken to improve the situation.

First

and foremost, the government should arrange an aggressive campaign nationwide regarding environmental issues to raise awareness among the public. People will know how natural damages done by them can cause habitat loss and the disastrous effects it brings about.

Additionally

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they will understand the importance of

wildlife

surroundings, and eventually, make an effort to avoid

such

damages

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.

Besides

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the government ought to allocate more budgets

on

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protecting

imperiled

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wild creatures. If these preventive actions are implemented properly, the extinction caused by human activities can be fudged. To conclude, the principal cause of

wildlife

extinction is

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habitat loss for various reasons.

However

, in order to prevent the loss some important measures should be obtained.